Thursday, March 24, 2016

James

I give to you the latest snippet in the Reincarnated (click the link for previous entries) story in eleventy-one words...

Charlotte seemed to reconsider saying anything, then settled on a grimace.

Olivia, annoyed at the reaction – though unconvinced that Charlotte would provide any suggestion of value – rolled her eyes and plunked back into her chair.

Charlotte sighed.

‘Oh my God, just say it. I’m not expecting much. Just…’

‘James,’ Charlotte blurted.

‘James who? Wait, James? As in the kid who…’

‘Yeah,’ Charlotte winced as if anticipating an imminent attack.

‘Runs around like a lunatic and tries to punch girls?’ finished Olivia. The thought processed a moment more. ‘Wait, how would you know?’

Charlotte hoped – but knew it impossible that – Olivia wouldn’t arrive at that question so quickly.

‘How do you know?’

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